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General
Organization or Map for Writing an Essay
You may
wish to think about organizing your essays like a courtroom
case. You have probably seen courtroom cases played out
on television, whether they were real-life trials, old Perry
Mason reruns, L. A. Law, even Ally McBeal.
These shows, despite their departure from reality in many,
many ways, actually do demonstrate the structure of an argument.
In order to understand this comparison, you must think of
yourself as the attorney, and you must think of your reader
as the judge or jury. Your goal as the attorney is to convince
that judge or jury to believe your case.
In every
case, you will see certain common elements:
Opening
Arguments (Introduction)
During
the opening arguments, the attorney (you, the writer) presents
to the judge or jury (your reader)
- a short
summary of what the case is all about, giving as much
or as little background information as necessary
- what
exactly he or she hopes to demonstrate to the judge or jurya
thesis ("my client is not guilty!")
- a little
glimpse of what sorts of evidence he or she may call
on or what direction he or she may head in order to prove
the thesis ("when you examine the physical evidence,
understand that he had no motive or opportunity to commit
the crime, and learn more about his character, you will
see that my client is absolutely not guilty."
Presentation
of Evidence (Body of Essay)
During
the body of the trial, the attorney calls witnesses and presents
evidence. During this phase,
- the
witnesses come one at a time (only one topic per paragraph)
- the
attorney thoroughly examines that witness before moving
on to the next witness (ideas of paragraph fully developed)
- then
the attorney calls the next witness (change paragraphs
when you change topics)
- the
attorney calls as many witnesses and presents as much evidence
as necessary in order to prove point (don't restrict
yourself to 5-paragraph essay)
Closing
Arguments (Conclusion)
During
closing arguments, the attorney wraps up his or her case for
the judge or jurythe ones who must be won over to agree
with the thesis. At this point, the attorney
- briefly
recaps the evidence and witnesses' testimony (without
simply listing or reciting what has already been said)
- ties
the evidence together, showing how it all goes together
to support the main argument
- revisits
the thesis in light of the evidence (this isn't the
same as simply repeating the thesis; it is recasting the
thesis in an even clearer light because of all of the evidence
the reader now understands)
Here are
some other features you should consider for each section of
your essay:
Introduction
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Provide
background information
-
Begin
to focus or narrow ideas down to thesis topic
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Thesis
sentence: states
the exact purpose or argument of your paper, suggests
the organization of the body paragraphs, and contains
the topic along with a comment on it
Body
Paragraphs
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Transition
- connects
this paragraph to the one before it
- shows
reader why this particular point follows the
preceding one
- Topic
sentence that tells
exactly what this particular paragraph is about
Conclusion
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