More process philosophy:  Writing to learn and writing to present learning 

          "If students cannot think or write, perhaps it is because they have been given too little  opportunity to write or think at all." -Paul Connolly, "Writing and the Ecology of Learning" 9 



          Writing to present learning is common in the academy. The thinking that underlies exams, theses, and other gateway writing tasks, is of course, "If you can't write it, you don't know it," a kind of back door admission that writing and learning are related and that one can measure the other. While writing to present learning is standard academic fare, writing to learn has had less emphasis, though writing that captures, records, represents, and explores makes it possible for students, scholars, and other professionals to develop and to present knowledge in writing. As mathematician Paul Connolly writes, 
            There is a profound difference between the preliminary use of language to serve thinking and the ultimate display of thought that we call exposition or argument.  
            ("Writing and the Ecology of Learning" 6) 
          Writing intensive programs have embraced "writing to learn" as part of their interest in the ways in which writing promotes learning and entails a process. The two main ways writing intensive programs address writing to learn are, first, through attention to the writing process, in which the earlier phases more specifically involve writing to discover, develop, and learn, and, second, through specific activities that ask students to engage in writing that is informal, exploratory, tentative, and certainly not graded in the way that a finished piece of writing would be. Such writing to learn activities may or may not be tied directly to writing assignments, but they are designed to help students engage course content meaningfully by writing. 

          A process relationship 
          The Writing Intensive Program emphasizes the process relation between writing to acquire learning and writing to present learning. Attention to the writing process in a writing intensive course involves both kinds and purposes of writing. Furthermore, both kinds and purposes of writing entail different feedback and evaluation strategies. 

          Though presumably any college writing task aims to help students learn (or why would we ask them to do it?), "writing to learn" has been specifically recognized for its role in helping students to acquire understanding and in making the writing that demonstrates learning, presents findings, or argues a point possible. The two general types and purposes of writing can be plotted this way: 
           

          Writing to learn:   
           
          Writing to present learning: 
           
          writing to capture, to record, 
           
          writing to communicate results, 
           
          to develop, to explore, to represent 
           
          to convince, to argue, 
           
          to acquire understanding or knowledge 
           
          to share understanding or knowledge, 
           
          to analyze relations 
           
          to present findings, discoveries 
           
          entails a "contingent repertoire" 
           
          entails more of an "empiricist repertoire" 
           
          As Paul Connolly observes,  
            What 'informal' writing to learn, as opposed to the longer, finished 'research paper,' restores to science education is the contingent quality of the scientific process (8).  
             
          Additional ways to think about writing to learn and writing to present learning:  
           
          Writing to learn:   
           
          Writing to present learning: 
           
          more informal, not finished  more formal, complete
          earlier in writing process  later in or result of process
          not "graded" as a finished product graded or evaluated by audience
          "low stakes" in terms of risks, penaltiesfor error, consequences higher stakes in terms of credibility or grades
          more private, for individual or small group to use or consider in a process more public, can stand alone
          The more informal language that marks writing to learn activities and earlier stages of the writing process is for one mathematician "the most important mediator of concepts we do not yet fully hold" (Connolly 4). It allows students to consider the questions they do not have formal language for, a lack that makes learning of any subject difficult. As Peter Elbow explains, "high stakes" writing or writing that presents learning more formally helps us to give grades based on how well a student has done in articulating their learning in writing and how well he or she has honored the formal conventions for presenting learning in a discipline ("High Stakes and Low Stakes in Assigning and Responding to Writing" 5-6). 
           

          Benefits of writing to learn activities: 

            1) Stimulates interest and curiosity (involves students in active learning). 
            2) Builds "confidence" in ability to reason through and solve problems. 

            3) Helps students "overcome anxiety " that occurs when education stresses answers, not options, and product, not process" (Connolly 6). 
             

          Summary: Writing develops writing 
          In courses in which writing to present leaning has dominated and in which such writing (perhaps in the form of formal papers) has not been staged, using more writing to learn activities and assignments, including staged assignments, teaches the benefits of engaging in writing in order to develop thinking and to generate more writing. In considering the relationships between the two types and purposes of writing, it is important to teach the relation between the two, for example how the formal paper develops from process writing. Again, this difference in kind and form means that we respond differently to the two types and purposes of writing assignments. Finally, while we acknowledge that there are many ways both to acquire and to demonstrate learning, we believe that writing offers distinctive benefits. 
           
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